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Unread Jun 8th, 2016, 05:21 pm
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Default I cannot find any grammar mistakes in my sentences.

Yesterday, I made up a few sentences about hockey and showed them to my friends who are not native English speakers. They said that they had found a few mistakes in them without telling me what they were. I am going to write them below.

(ex) The local minor hockey league honors players who score 80 or more goals per season. Over the last three seasons, Mike has been playing very well, but he narrowly missed the mark. Finally, in the first half of the current season, he played even better and quickly increased his goal tally to the required mark.

I really cannot find any grammar mistakes in my sentences. Could someone please identify my mistakes? Thank you very much for your time and help.
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