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Is it the right place to use "As a result" in the following text ?
The text begins with:" Smoking advertising should be banned because cigarettes harm the health of smokers and passive smokers. As a result so many people in the world who smoke a packet os cigarettes a day die earlier than non smokers...............etc"
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