 Please submit with Japanese and English names
A notice to invite contributions says
-Please submit with Japanese and English names to the Environmental Campaign Committee Secretariat, or fax to us at 28278138.
Do you think
1. 'English names' is wrong, because eg Tamaki Suo is a Japanese name, not an English name, which 'Tom/Peter' is, and so the sentence should be 'name in English'.
2. 'submit...' and 'fax to us' are wrong, because you must have objects after 'submit' and 'fax', and the sentence should be 'Please submit your contributions, with your name in Japanese and English, to the Environmental Campaign Committee Secretariat, or fax them to us at 28278138. |