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      |    Sue   |    |    Join Date: Oct 8th, 2006  Location: Milan  
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        Re: Am I using the adverb, severely, correctly?       No.  Severely doesn't fit either of these contexts.It can be used as an adverb of manner :  He spoke to her severely. 
but here you are using it as an intensifier for an entire clause - and if you look at a  concordancer you'll see that it is used mainly to intensify an individual verb or adjective - eg :   This would severely limit our capacity to... 
The two modes were kept severely distinct. 
I would rewrite your sentences as :  1. Stress caused him to suffer from severe hair loss. 
2. Their lack of experience led to a severe loss of money. 
Notice that I've here changed to the adjective  severe so that I can use it to premodify/intensify the noun phrase. I'm no longer trying to use the adverb as an intensifier for  the whole clause. If you really want the adverb you might say :   3. Stress caused him to suffer severely from hair loss 
but 3 doesn't sound as natural as 1, and I can't think of a natural sounding equivalent for the second sentence.           |